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I like my band students to intellectualize about a piece before they play it. Sometimes we focus on "hearing with our eyes", but as we began the piece, Tame the Savage Sea by Elliot Del Borgo, I asked the students to write a paragraph about what would this piece sound like if YOU were the composer. I asked them to think about a story line and talk about instruments and musical techniques that they might use. What I got back tells me that they are truly beginning to understand how music works! This is only a small sampling of wonderful work I got from the kids (7th & 8th grade); there are at least 25 others that I would be equally glad to post here -- the choosing was a bit random.
(These are off-the-cuff, not polished, writings and I only edited for spelling.)

David M

Attrace C

Allson vR

Nick K

Theresa M

Matt B

Tally L

Katie K

Andrew B

Claire L

Evan G

Galen H

Emily P

Laura D


If I were to write a song that was called, "Tame the Savage Sea," I would start it out calm with the clarinets blowing through the instrument to make a wind sound. Then I would crescendo up into a huge storm where I'd use a thunder rod and many drum rolls. I would have the brass playing very deep and loud as the flutes play a high trill. Then, at the peak of excitement, I would go suddenly to the beginning tempo and melody for four measures before a huge crescendo to fff in the last measure and ending suddenly.       --David M. (percussion - grade 8)

If I were to write a piece called, "Tame the Savage Sea," I would start out portraying the sea. I would do this by having drum and low winds do a steady beat, as if the savage waves are constantly beating back and forth. Then I would do a soft, but low, maybe saxophone, part and gradually getting louder as if a mysterious sorcerer is approaching. As he gets closer to the sea, suspense builds and flutes play high notes. When the person reaches the shore, all music suddenly stops, then flutes or clarinets will start with a lighthearted melody. This is sort of like they're teasing and playing with the waves. Eventually, suspense will build again, like the person is battling with the sea. The piece will go out with a bang because one of them wins. The whole piece will be kind of mysterious and will become very intense when the scene is mid-battle.        --Attrace C. (French horn - grade 8)

If I wrote "Tame the Savage Sea," I would start out with the low winds and saxes (the waves booming against the hull of the schooner), with snare drum and trumpet to punctuate the sounds. After a little bit, I would add flutes, clarinets and oboes as the shrieking wind. If they play high and shriekily enough, it would sound like howling wind. I then would have a few trumpets "yelling" back and forth across the gale, like crew members of the ship. Then I would have snare drum (with the snare on) tap out sharp, staccato notes, like wood breaking.

After a little bit, the storm would peter out and the time signature would change to 6/8 to give the music a limping feel to it, like a broken, battered ship coming into port. Then it would get loud again, as the people in the harbor saw that the ship was alive (every instrument) and it would end abruptly.        --Alison vR (flute - grade 8)

If I was the composer of "Tame the Savage Sea," I would base it on other pieces I had played before, like "Ghost Fleet". I think I would make the piece start out calmly, but then make it seem like a storm was rolling into a little bay. The storm will keep on building up until havoc broke loose. There would be huge waves, lots of lightening and thunder and then suddenly it will become calm again. It would be like nothing had happened in that little bay.

To start the piece out, I would probably use flutes and clarinets and then start building up with trumpets, low winds and saxophones. that would be the clouds rolling in. The lightening and thunder will be made with percussion. After everyone had built up, I would suddenly drop it back down to the clarinets and flutes so they could end it like they had started it.        --Nick K. (trumpet - grade 8)

  • I would put some choppy rhythms in to make it sound like a "savage sea", such as triplets.
  • The flutes might have some louder, long notes to sound like hard winds, almost like a whistling wind.
  • I would put some hard accents in a rhythmic patter for part of the trumpets to sound like waves crashing, but with rhythm.
  • The percussion would have shakers to sound like the crashing.
  • The low winds might have some low, long notes that go up and down, to be like a HUGE ship making its way through.
  • There might be a huge gong hit for when the sea settles and the sun starts to come out.       --Teresa M. (clarinet - grade 7)

If I were writing a song called, "Tame the Savage Sea," I would do many things. One thing that I would do is have it start with high pitched flutes playing fast, like a sunny day. Then I would have the brass roll in with a low pitch, like the storm is rolling in. It would be a crescendo. Then I would have crash cymbals, like lightening. It would be an all out storm of brass, bass drums, timpani, crashes and tom-toms. Then I would have a "conversation" between the flutes and the storm. Then it would go back to flutes.      --Matt B. (percussion - grade 8)

If I were writing a piece named, "Tame the Savage Sea," I would have a quiet part at the beginning, a loud and fast part in the middle, and a quiet part at the end. I would have low flute parts at the beginning and end with clarinets to impersonate the tame sea. In the middle, I would have the trumpets and flutes playing really high, fast notes and the low winds lower and playing slurred notes to impersonate what is really under the sea - just calm waters. I think I would have the saxophones play a large range and be quieter than the flutes and the trumpets, and be like a boat being tossed around.      --Tally L. (tuba - grade 7)

If I were a composer and I was writing a piece called, "Tame the Savage Sea," there would be a whole story behind it. It would start out nice and calmly and soon after, a storm would start. It would rise in power slowly. with lightening, thunder, rain and the pounding of waves. Every so often to "tame" the sea or storm, flutes or clarinets would come in and act like a beam of sunlight trying to break through the clouds. The sea would be whirlpools and huge waves with strong rip tides. It would probably begin with the flutes, clarinets, and maybe alto sax at piano, and build up the storm with the low winds and sharp brass instruments. there would be a lot of crescendos, decrescendos and accents to make the audience on the edge of their seats. There would be soft sections as well as loud sections so that the audience wouldn't stop listening. To conclude, my piece would be a mixture of techniques and instruments.        --Katie K (French horn - grade 8)

If I were the composer of, "Tame the Savage Sea," I would be sure to show just how savage the sea can sometimes become, and what kind of strength is needed to tame it. The more angry sections would probably have very different parts in the different instruments, with low winds creating a deep bass for the rest of the instruments. The flutes and clarinets would be working on scales, up and down, like a ship rocking back and forth. There would be cymbals to imitate lightening and bass drum hits for thunder. Meanwhile, the trumpets might be doing a melody that seems strong and powerful. At the end, there would be a coda that is "the next day" when the sea has settled. This would be peaceful and would end the piece with a calm long note.      --Andrew B. (flute - grade 8)

If I wrote a piece with this title, I would try to make it sound very loud and wild at the beginning, but then calm down as the sea was being tamed. In between these two periods of the song there would be bouncing back and forth between wild and calm as if someone was fighting. I would have the low winds and bass drum be the wild sea and flutes and clarinets the calm sea. The saxes and trumpets could be trying to make the low winds into flutes and clarinets. The whole piece would not be like that though, because the audience would become bored. That's what the piece would be like if I wrote it.      --Claire L. (tenor sax - grade 7)

If I were to write a piece with this name, I would have the bass drum play a lot to get the loud, booming sound of thunder (or timpani). I would have the flutes play high notes to get the sound of the wind along with the saxes because of their almost eerie sound. And I would have the trumpets play notes around the mid-G range. The song would be fast paced with many staccatos. At the end, I would have it sound like a new day breaking.       --Evan G (trumpet - grade 8)

If I were writing this piece, the start would try to imply a small boat in the middle of a huge storm. The two halves of the band might have a loud, violent "call and response" like waves crashing. Timpani, bass drum and snares with their snares off, would try to make thunder. Flutes might try to make sudden loud, high notes, like lightening flashes. It would get louder and louder, until it would suddenly stop, like the passengers were knocked out or passed out from exhaustion, then it would start a quieter section to invoke the image of a flat sea. Somehow there would be the sound of seagulls. Maybe the clarinets could do that.       --Galen (bari sax - grade 8)

If I wrote this piece it would sound like a ship on a peaceful voyage and then winds pick up and the clouds turn black, waves get huge and it is crazy and the song would end with a bang. I would do this by making the parts sound messy together, but blend. For instance, C and E blend well so one flute could be playing a C and the other an E, but their rhythm would be hectic and uneven. That would create the storm. Also, I would have the drums interpreting rain, wind, thunder and lightening. When it is a peaceful song in the beginning, I would have the wind instruments playing a sweet melody and imitate soft waves and the percussion would be softly patting on the snares and playing xylophone.      --Emily P. (flute - grade 7)

I might start with a gentle, but not slow, flute part. This is the sunrise. The low winds would come in with long, gentle notes, the calm sea. Then everything starts to go out of whack. The trumpets, clarinets and saxes come in, playing a more aggressive, stormy part. The flutes switch to playing staccato notes that imitate rain. The low winds are the thunder, rolling through occasionally, then the trumpets are the brave conquistadors, majestically playing out a heroic tune. The storm sounds die down as the trumpets continue and finally we end with the low winds imitating the calm sea.       --Laura D. (flute - grade 8)

12/21/2004

 


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